Friday, May 22, 2009

The Avanger

THERES AN EMPTINESS INSIDE OF ME
EVERYTHING'S LIKE A BLASPHEMY
NO ONE HERE CAN SEE MY PAIN
CZ I SHED TEARS WHEN IT RAINS

ANXIETY IS KILLIN ME
MY LIFE IS LIKE AGONY
SHATTERED AND BROKEN MY HEART WEEPS AT NIGHT
TRYIN TO FIGHT A LOST FIGHT

THERES AN EMPTINESS INSIDE OF ME
EVERYTHING'S LIKE A BLASPHEMY.........

THERE'S NO MERE GLIMPSE OF ANY HOPE
LONELINESS KNOW ME FOR SURE
I HV NEVER HAD A FRIEND
THOSE I LOVED BROKE MY TRUST


THERES AN EMPTINESS INSIDE OF ME
EVERYTHING'S LIKE A BLASPHEMY.........


MY FEELING WERE OF NO MEANS
IGNORANCE WAS MEANT FOR ME
DITCHED FROM BACK AND SCREWED FROM FRONT
MY FATE WAS ALWAYS IN A SLUMP

EMOTIONS WERE CUT TO GORE
MY LOVE PROVED TO BE A WHORE
NEVER LIED AND NEVER CROOKED
STILL I CRIED AND STILL I SHOOKED

THERES AN EMPTINESS INSIDE OF ME
EVERYTHING'S LIKE A BLASPHEMY.........

IN THE END WAT I FOUND
MY LIFE WAS SO CONFOUND
I DN GIV A DAMN NO MORE
I DN CARE FR ANY WHORE

EVERYTHING IN LIFE IS LOST
NOW I M N AVENGER....................... 

4 comments:

-NainA- said...

I should say Mayank.. This is a poem that reaches out to me yet I cant help but tell you this.. Life is beautiful :) I know you feel like there is a lot filled up inside of you.. Lekin mere dost.. This is just the beginning.. Hang in there ;)..

--N I'm always hea for u :)..--

A very touching poem.. Written straight from the heart..

You could however refine it a bit more.. Like the grammar.. or the vocabulary used.. <-- Jus a tip :)

fiddle-faddle said...

stagnant life......expressed in simplest best :)

SOULBLOGGER said...

Hey Thanks Mini

and thanks sonu
well plz keep on advising me

and sonu i will be grateful if can mail me the edited version i wud like to rectify my mistakes

mansibhargava1989 said...

Mayank
all lines are really touching.. and nice usage of vocab dear...